Wednesday, January 20, 2010

Thomas Hardys' topic sentences

The two authors are saying that in war men do many stupid things that causes them to die.


In war men are forced to commit terrible acts that violate their morals.



Men during the time of war often do things without thinking that gets themselves killed.



1 comment:

Ms. Cohen said...

Good. You are having trouble with subject/verb agreement in two of the three sentences. Please fix.