1. a War is portrayed as being random and unfair because the unexpected can happen.
War is portrayed as being random and unfair because people can have bad luck.
War is random and unfair because anybody on the battlefield can die.
War is portrayed as being random and unfair because soldiers are not in control of their own destiny
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Papa Hem, this looks good. Your second topic sentence needs some work... "anyone can die" seems very close to the other ideas. And I am concerned that "anyone can die" might be a statement of the obvious. Maybe this is a chance to talk about civilians?
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