Monday, May 24, 2010
William Blake's Mrs Dubose Paragraph
Thursday, May 13, 2010
Langston Hughes Paragraph
Atticus’s Belief that Ms. Dubose is a Great Lady
Atticus believes that Ms. Dubose is a great lady because she had the courage not to give up on her life. Ms. Dubose had been diagnosed to live for only a brief couple of more months. She could of conformed to normality and took the morpheme, but she broke herself off of it, so that she would leave the world “beholden to nobody,” In this excerpt from To Kill a Mockingbird it shows how Atticus believes that Ms. Dubose is courageous not to give up.
“I wanted you to see what real courage is, instead of getting the idea that courage is a man with a gun in his hand. It’s when you know you’re licked before you begin but you begin anyway and you see it through no matter what. You rarely win, but sometimes you do. Ms. Dubose won, all ninety-eight pounds of her. According to her views she died beholden of nothing or nobody. She was the bravest person I ever knew”
This quote proves that Atticus believed she had courage because it shows that Ms. Dubose had the courage that Atticus believed in. This courage was not “a man with a gun in his hand”, but the courage that even when death stares you in the eye, instead of just conceding to it, you decide to make the most of it. Courage is doing something that frightens one. Even though frightened by death Ms. Dubose never gives up on her life or takes the easy way out by consuming morpheme. When Atticus says “real courage… instead of… a man with a gun” he means that biggest and toughest soldier is not always the most brave. In this quote Atticus talks of what courage really is “It’s when you know you’re licked before you begin but you begin anyway.” This quote means that even if your going to die, it takes real courage is not to lay your head in the sand and die, but finish what you want to do in your life and die with no regrets. Ms. Dubose died “beholden of nothing or nobody.” This quote means that Ms. Dubose died owing nobody anything. Atticus believed that it took real courage to make amends with all of her regrets throughout her life
Tuesday, May 11, 2010
Arthur millers Ms. Dubose is a great lady
Atticus says that Ms. Dubose is a great lady because she quit her addiction to pills, and is still alive because of that. To quit an addiction isn’t easy and because it isn’t easy and for someone to quit takes a lot of them during the process.
"she said she was going to leave this world beholden to
nothing and nobody. Jem, when you're sick as as she
was, it's all right to take anything to make it easier,
but it wasn't all right for her. She said she meant to
break herself of it before she died, and that's what
she did."
Atticus in this quotation says that when you are as sick as her it’s ok to take something to make it easier, but since she quit that is why Atticus thinks she was a great lady. Then it also says “she said she meant to break herself of it before she died , and that’s what she did.” Atticus says that she is a great lady because he said she would do something and she did it and as it was said before to get out of an addiction isn’t easy. This is one of the reasons that make Atticus think Ms. Dubose is a great lady.
Why Atticus calls Mrs. Dubose a great lady (Sherwood Anderson)
Atticus calls Mrs. Dubose a great lady because he thinks she does what she believes is correct. She is a morphine addict, she would take them as painkillers everyday. She got sick and the doctors told her that she would only have a few months to live. She wanted to die without holding on to anything or anyone. She felt that it would be better if she died not addicted to the pills.
“She said she was going to leave this world beholding nothing and nobody. Jem, when you’re sick as she was, it’s all right to take anything to make it easier, but it wasn’t all right for her. She said she mentioned to break herself of it before she died, and that’s what she did.”
“She said she was going to leave this world beholding nothing and nobody.” She wanted to follow what she believed and she stopped taking the pills. Many people would have kept taking them because it stops the pain. She stopped and died accomplishing what she wanted to be done. She wanted to “Break herself of it.” The “it” refers to her addiction to the morphine. She mentioned to break herself of it and “that’s what she did.” Because she stopped taking the pills, Atticus thought she was a brave lady. She went through all the pain to leave the world “holding nothing and nobody.”
Monday, May 10, 2010
Robert Frost's Paper
Atticus tells Jem that Mrs. Dubose was a great lady. To Jem it seems strange that his father is referring to this seemingly mean old lady as a great person. Atticus has good reasons to bestow this title apon her. Atticus says that:
“She had her own views about things, a lot different from mine, maybe… son, I told you that if you hadn’t lost your head id have made you go read to her. I wanted you to see something about her—I wanted you to see what real courage is, instead of getting the idea that courage is a man with a gun in his hand. Its when you know you’re licked before begin but you begin anyway and you see it through no matter what.”
In this passage, there are several examples of how Atticus feels about Mrs. Dubose. Being told as having “her own views” is very descriptive. It shows that she did not agree with everyone on everything like most of the Maycomb residence. She has an independent opinion on issues pertaining to the daily way of life in Maycomb. Atticus also say that there is “something about her”. This shows that Atticus feels Mrs. Dubose has a unique perspective on something. It shows that she is important to the mental and emotional development of Jem and Scout. Atticus then goes on to describe her as having “real courage”. Having real courage, as it pertains to Mrs. Dubose, is that she is not afraid to tell you what she thinks on a certain thing. If she doesn’t like your behavior she will come right out and tell you that. To Atticus, that is the real sign of courage and he feels the Jem and Scout should learn from her to always defend your morals and beliefs. He says that courage is not a “man with a gun”. Atticus feels that courage is being verbally protective of ones beliefs and not fighting ones opponent. Atticus has the right to say that Mrs. Dubose is a “great lady” because her examples of courage greatly out way any other Maycombs residences examples of courage.
Mrs.Dubose, a great lady
Atticus called Mrs.Dubose a great lady because she always spoke her mind and did not care what anybody else might think. Mrs.Dubose always gave her opinion, whatever she was thinking she said it and made sure that people heard her. Whenever Jem and Scout would walk by her house she’d always tell them that there was something wrong with them. When Jem and Scout first walked into her house the first thing that she said to Jem was “ I see you brought that dirty little sister of yours, did you”. Even though she knew Jem and Scout hated her for her beliefs she stuck to them.
“After all the things she said about you, a lady? She was. She had her own views about things, a lot different from mine, maybe….son, I told you that if you hadn’t lost your head I’d of made you go read to her. I wanted you to see something about her- I wanted you to see what real courage is, instead of getting the idea that courage is a man with a gun in his hand.”
Atticus not only wanted to tell Jem that Mrs.Dubose was a great lady, he wanted to show Jem, what Mrs.Dubose stood for. Atticus told Jem that she was a great lady despite the nasty things that she said about him. Mrs.Dubose would say terrible things about Atticus and call him things like ‘Negro Lover”. Atticus goes on to say that even when her ideas were often different from his, she stood up for them despite what anyone thought. Mrs.Dubose is also a great lady according to Atticus because she has real courage. Mrs.Dubose speaks her mind, calls people names, and yells at children, but all that takes real guts. Atticus wanted to show Jem that real courage is not some guy with a gun, but a frail old woman who stood up for her beliefs. That is what courage really is.
Mrs. Dubose
The reason that Mrs. Dubose is recognized by Atticus is that she lets everyone know what and why she believes in. Atticus also admires her “courage” for even though she knows she can’t win, she still believes in what she believes in. Although she would never call Atticus a “negro lover”, Atticus respected that she was not like everyone else in just going with the crowd and believing. She backs up her answers.
“She had her own views about things, a lot different from mine, maybe...son, I told you that if you hadn't lost your head I'd have made you go read to her. I wanted you to see something about her, I wanted you to see what real courage is, instead of getting the idea that real courage is a man with a gun in his hand.”
Atticus does not express his beliefs as much as she did. Mrs. Dubose was not in the social hierarchy of the town so she had to deal with the fact that she was not technically “in” in the town of Maycomb. When Atticus says “I wanted you to see what real courage is, instead of getting the idea that real courage is a man with a gun in his hand” he wants to also tell them why he does not hunt like all of the other men but reads instead.
John Keats Mrs. Dubose
It's when you know you're licked before you begin but you begin anyway and you see it through no matter what. You rarely win, but sometimes you do. Mrs. Dubose won, all ninety-eight pounds of her. According to her views, she died beholden to nothing and nobody.
When Atticus says she "knew she was licked before she began", he is saying that Mrs. Dubose knew that it would be very difficult to quit morphine, but she tried anyway. Atticus tells Scout that he won't win the trial and that "the jury couldn't possibly be expected to take Tom Robinson's word against the Ewells'", but Atticus still defends Tom Robinson, because there "is no reason for us not to try to win" and "see it through no matter what." Atticus is showing Jem and Scout how courageous Mrs. Dubose is, because she sets a good example shortly before the family will have to suffer through the trial. Mrs. Dubose suffers everyday when she tries to quit morphine. She never gives up, despite that fact that it is "alright to take anything to make it (the pain) easier." Mrs. Dubose sticks to her almost impossible goal and wins. She has "real courage."
Truman Caporte Great Lady
“I wanted you to see what real courage is, instead of getting the idea that courage is a man with a gun in his hand. It’s when you know you’re licked before you begin but you begin anyway and you see it through no matter what. You rarely win but sometimes you do.”
p. 149
Atticus describes Ms. Dubose as having real courage. He compares that to fake courage, which is simply the image of a powerful man with a gun. He shows Jem that Ms. Dubose is a great lady because she goes on even though she knows that she will probably not survive in the end. He shows him that true courage, and a great man or woman is formed by ones ability to fight on even when the odds are against you. She did this by using morphine as a painkiller for years because of her fight to survive. This is very similar to Atticus’ situation when he defends a black man. He wants to show Jem what real courage is, and that Ms. Dubose is a great lady despite the fact that she has completely different beliefs from himself.
A GREAT LADY
Atticus calls Mrs. Dubose a great lady because in a way, they have similar morals. Atticus is standing up for the black man at trial and even though he knows he is not going to win, stays by his client’s side. He doesn’t care that he is risking his sot as a well talked about, good man, because he knows he is staying by his morals. He is teaching his children a good lesson and tries as hard as he can to be a good example. He then tells them the Mrs. Dubose was also a good role model of the morals he is trying to set into place in his children.
“She had her own views about things, a lot different from mine, maybe”… “I wanted you to see what real courage is, instead of getting the idea that courage is a man with a gun in his hand. It’s when you know you’re licked even before you begin but you begin anyways and you see through no matter what. You rarely win, but Mrs. Dubose won, all ninety-eight pounds of her. According to her views, she dies beholden to nothing and nobody. She was the bravest person I ever knew.”
When Atticus says that “she had her own views about things, a lot different then mine, maybe” he is in away saying that he is similar to her. He knows that she knows what “real courage” is. What Atticus did, by agreeing to defend a black man in a court case was real courage. He knew he couldn’t win, and was “licked” from the start. He however stood by his beliefs. This is why she is a great person because she stood by her beliefs as strongly as Atticus does. When the passage says, “You rarely win”, it is proving that he knew that he would probably not win. But Mrs. Dubose won, and she died knowing that. This is the message Atticus is trying to force his kids to understand. She died with probably no friends or family, but was the “bravest person” Atticus “ever” knew.
Mrs. Dubose, a great lady?
“She had her own view about things, a lot different from mine,”
“I wanted you to see what real courage is, instead of getting the idea that courage is a man with a gun in his hand. It’s when you know you’re licked before you begin but you begin anyway and you see it through no matter what.”
“She was the bravest person I ever knew.”
Atticus realizes that his views are different from most people, and that Mrs. Dubose believes in what she wants to believe in. Even though she is a week old woman she has lots of courage. Atticus was planning to send his kids to Mrs. Dubose house even before they were made. He wanted his children to witness her bravery before she died. According to Atticus she had more courage then a man with a gun. She knew that everyday she had to live with the pain and knew she was going to get licked but she went out anyway and fought the fact that she was an “outsider.”
F. Scott Fitzgerald, "Great Lady"
" She was. She had her own views about things, a lot different from mine, maybe...son, I told you that if you hadn't lost your head I'd have made you go read to her. I wanted you to see something about her-I wanted you to see what real courage is, instead of getting the idea that real courage is a man with a gun in his head. It's when you know you're licked before you begin but you begin anyway and you see it through no matter what.”
When Atticus says that Mr. Dubose “had her own views on things” he is saying that she has beliefs that were different than Atticus’. Atticus is also saying that it is not wrong to have different opinions than someone else, but one needs to respect one another’s opinions and morals. In this, Atticus is also saying that one doesn’t need to agree with another’s morals but respect them. On the third line Atticus says, “I wanted you to see what real courage is.” In this line Atticus is saying that it does not take a lot of courage to believe in what other people believe in, but it takes much more courage to believe in a different moral and be proud of it. Atticus wants to teach Scout and Jem what true courage it takes to believe in what one believes in rather than believing in what people tell one or in what other people show one. Atticus is also saying that Mrs. Dubose speaks from her true heart and doesn’t care what other people say about what she believes in and that she is not shy about her beliefs. The most important part is that Atticus is insinuating that it is also important to believe in what one thinks is right. On the last line, Atticus says, “you see it through no matter what”. Here Atticus is saying that Mrs. Dubose believes in her a true “great lady”.
Why Atticus Thinks Mrs.Dubose is a Great Lady
"She had her own view about things....... I wanted you to see something about her,I wanted you to see what real courage is, instead of getting the idea that courage is a man with a gun in his hand."
Atticus clearly respects that she has strong and clear views, and he also wanted to show his kids that a man with a gun in his hands ready to kill someone wasn't the only type of courage there was and that being a headstrong person and saying things as they to whoever and whenever also takes courage.
Thomas Hardy's "great lady"
" She was. She had her own view about things, a lot different from mine, maybe...son, I told you that if you hadn't lost your head I'd have made you go read to her. I wanted you to see something about her-I wanted you to see what real courage is, instead of getting the idea that courage is a man with a gun in his hand. It's when you know you're licked before you begin but you begin anyway and you see it through no matter what. You rarely win, but sometimes do. Mrs. Dubose won, all ninety-eight pounds of her. According to her views, she died beholden to nothing and nobody. She was the bravest person I ever knew."
This passage illustrates that Atticus respects her, and supports her. He likely felt this way because he feels bad for her. He intends to give her credit by calling her a great lady. She had her own view on things suggests that she was likely racist and grumpy. In result to this, she had a negative representation to the rest of the town. It seems that people looked at her like a different outsider, who was grumpy and crazy. She probably therefore didn't have any friends. He wants his kids to have a charitable feeling in them, and wants them to help out. He wants his kids to be nice and read to her. She had courage to live her life the way she did. He explains that courage is when one knows that something isn't going to work out, but does it anyway. She never gave up, and he respects that about her. She rarely wins, but keeps on going and never let's it get to her. She thought positively. Beholden means under a moral obligation to somebody. She didn't have any moral obligation to anybody. She thought that her life had no meaning, but she went on. Atticus entitles her as courageous because he feels bad for her. He therefore says that she was a great lady.
Jack Kerouac's Mrs. Dubose Parapraph
"She said she was going to leave this world beholden to nothing and nobody. Jem, when you're sick as she was, it's all right to take anything to make it easier, but it wasn't right for her. She said she meant to break herself of it before she died, and that's what she did."
The repeated use of actions such as "she said" or "she did" shows how she did not just follow her own morals but also acted upon them. Atticus thinks Mrs. Dubose is a great lady because she was true to her word. When she said something she intended to do it and that is why Atticus called Mrs. Dubose a great lady. The word sick shows how at that particular moment of time Mrs. Dubose was at disease. Mrs. Dubose. still stuck to her morals during her time being sick to make sure that she was not beholden to anything. The idea of it being all right to take morphine to stay alive seems totally normal however she did not agree with taking morphine and followed her own morals and went off of the morphine. Atticus calls Mrs. Dubose a great lady because she was always true to her morals and acted upon them.
Sunday, May 9, 2010
Edward Albee's Mrs. Dubose Response
Atticus calls Mrs. Dubose a “great lady” because he believes that she is admirable in the way that she holds her opinions. He describes her as being brave and having no fear of what other think of her. In the quotation on page 149 Atticus describes her with great pride even though her opinion are greatly immoral to Atticus.
“She had her own views about things, a lot different from mine, maybe. . . son,…. I wanted you to see what real courage is, instead of getting the idea that courage is a man with a gun in his hand. It’s when you know you’re licked even before you begin but you begin anyways and you see through no matter what. You rarely win, but Mrs. Dubose won, all ninety-eight pounds of her. According to her views, she dies beholden to nothing and nobody. She was the bravest person I ever knew.”
The first line proves that Atticus disagreed with her yet still greatly respected her opinions. This shows many things about Atticus, but most importantly it shows that he is man of reason that respects opinions no matter how troubled they might be to him. Atticus uses the word “courage” to describe Mrs. Dubose. Courage means the ability to confront fear and Atticus believes it is much more courageous to face fear with reason and knowledge then with a loaded gun. Mrs. Dubose confronts fear when she speaks to others around town and does not filter her tongue because she has no fear of what they might think. Atticus also thinks that Mrs. Dubose is “great lady” because he uses the phrase “know you’re licked even before you begin.” This phrase shows that Mrs. Dubose was the kind of person who would fight a nearly lost war just because she believed it was the right thing to do. Atticus also uses the phrase “beholden to nothing and nobody.” This means that Mrs. Dubose owed nothing to nobody and had not debts. It also means that she was truly an individual with her own views. And lastly he uses the word “brave” to describe her which shows his grate respect for her and that she truly is a “grate lady”
Charles Dickens: "great lady" Paragraph
Em Forster Mrs. Dubose
Scout and Jem walked past Mrs. Dubose house when she yelled something horrible about Atticus. Jem lost his temper and destroyed all of Mrs. Dubose’s camellia bushes. Atticus gave Jem the punishment of going to Mrs. Dubose’s house and doing what she wanted. She was so mean that when Scout was she trying to making pleasant conversation all Mrs. Dubose replied was.
"Hey, Mrs. Dubose," I would recieve for an answer "don't you say hey to me, you ugly girl. You say good afternoon, Mrs. Dubose!"
Mrs. Dubose gave off the image of a cranky, tired, old woman who hated everything.She requested that Jem read to her for two hours everyday. Jem hated every minute of it and was thankful when it was over. Two weeks after Jem stopped going to her house she died. Mrs. Dubose was a kind lady with an addiction to Morphine and when she doesn’t have it she was angry. Before she died she gave her maid something to give to Jem, it was a single camellia flower. It shows how Mrs. Dubose was actually a kind woman in a cranky one’s body. Atticus said she was a great lady and he was right.
Percy Shelley Mrs. Dubose Response
“Son I told you that if you hadn’t lost your head I’d have made you go read to her. I wanted you to see what real courage is, instead of getting the idea that courage is a man with a gun in his hand. It’s when you know you’re licked even before you begin but you begin anyways and you see through no matter what. You rarely win, but Mrs. Dubose won, all ninety-eight pounds of her. According to her views, she dies beholden to nothing and nobody. She was the bravest person I ever knew.”
In the quotation, Atticus shows that her admirable approach to her addiction is proof of her nobility. In the quotation, Atticus uses the words “licked” and “begin.” These words show how Mrs. Dubose had to start a new stage of her life although she was close to death. The words “no matter what” and “rarely win” show that Mrs.Dubose was fighting a nearly lost war. However, as Atticus explains in the quotation she is exceedingly “brave” and able to fight her addiction. In these examples Atticus proofs that Mrs. Dubose was perseverant and never gave up. In the quotation, Atticus also uses the word “beholden.” Showing that Mrs. Dubose had died without owing anything to anyone and with a clear conscious. Mrs. Dubose "real courage", strong morals, and willingness makes even a person like Atticus admire her.
Joseph Conrad Mrs. Dubose
Nathaniel Hawthorne's "Great Lady" paragraph
James Baldwin Ms. Dubose
Mark Twain's: Great Lady
Atticus and the "Great Lady"
Theodore Dreiser "great lady"
Lewis Carroll Paragraph
Atticus calls Mrs. Dubose a great lady because Mrs. Dubose was a brave lady and she was willing to voice her opinion on anything. When she disagreed with something, she would never hesitate to speak. An example of this is when she calls Atticus a “nigger-lover” on page 135-36.
”Your father’s no better than the niggers and trash he works for! Not only a Finch waiting on tables but one in the courthouse lawing for niggers.”
Atticus respects her for being willing to say all of these daring things to Jem and Scout right in front of their faces. He thinks that she has the right to do or say whatever she wants, no matter how he feels on the inside. He conducts himself in a brave manner throughout the entire chapter, showing nothing but kindness and does not display bad feelings towards her. He is a good model to everyone around him and he helps others like Jem, have a little bit more respect for her [Mrs. Dubose].
Nabakov's Great Lady Paragraph
Tuesday, April 13, 2010
Jack Kerouac's Winter Tone, Revised Version.
“You Quackenbush don’t know anything about who I am. That launched me, and I had to go on and say, or anything else. Listen you maimed son of a bitch … I hit him hard across the face. I didn’t know why for an instant; it was almost as though I were maimed."
The way Gene says “you, Quackenbush” shows his anger toward Quackenbush. This feeling of anger leads to Devon’s winter session being much more warlike. The fact that Gene was “launched” shows how he then went on further on the offensive about Quackenbush for little reason. The word launched can come from shooting something out of a cannon, which was still going on during World War II and shows how the fighting in Devon was similar to that of what was going on in Nazi Germany. Calling someone a “maimed son of a bitch” obviously shows that the boys are fighting with one another. Furthermore the word maimed means crippled or injured, which relates to the war over in Europe. When Gene says that he were maimed he may be talking about the emotional blackmail that Finny has over him. This is the guilt inside of himself that he ruined Finny’s life and he will be emotionally maimed for the rest of his life. His emotional problems are similar to those of returning war veterans who have witnessed the death of many fellow soldiers.
Winter Session 1942 by John Keats
I’ve got to preside at a meeting of the Golden Fleece Debating Society tonight,” he said in a tone of amazed contempt, “the Golden Fleece Debating Society! We’re mad here, all mad,” and he went off raving to himself in the dark.
Brinker is saying that, while there is a war going on, he is attending unimportant clubs such as the “Golden Fleece Debating Society.” This frustrates Brinker so much that he shouts again in bewilderment, “the Golden Fleece Debating Society!” Then, he goes off “raving to himself” in frustration. He is craving to escape the daily, boring life at Devon and go off to war. The war, at this point, obsesses him. This stresses the fact that while Devon is living in normalcy, there is a war going on. As a result the war makes a large impact on the winter session.
Monday, April 12, 2010
The revision of Truman Capote's paragraph on the tone of the winter term at the Devon school.
“Why go through the motions of getting an education and watch to war slowly chip away at the one thing I had loved here, the peace, the measureless, careless peace of the Devon summer? Others. The Quackenbushes of this world, could calmly watch the war approach them and jump into it at the last and most advantageous instant, as though buying into the stock market. But I couldn’t… He looked up with a provocative grin, ‘Hi pal, where’s the brass band?’ Everything that had happened throughout the day faded like the first false snowfall of the winter.”
Pg. 101-102
In this paragraph, Gene really wants to go to war. He gets himself completely ready mentally and is excited to leave. Once Finny comes in he knows there is no way he will be able to go to war. He describes as if it “faded like the first false snowfall of the winter.” This shows that after seeing Finny there was not even a minor thought of going to war. It was out of the realm of possible and he would never be able to consider it again. Finny makes it very difficult and almost impossible for Gene to leave by saying such nice and friendly words like “Hi pal.” By saying this, Finny lures Gene in by making him feel so guilty for causing Finny’s fall off the tree. Gene is forced to stay there, with Finny, for the rest of his time at Devon. From the outside and the least deep part of their relationship, it seems as if a friend has been reunited with another friend and that Gene must stay faithful to his “best friend.” This is clearly the start of a chain of events where Gene will pretend to be friends with Finny, until he finally says no.
Ernest Hemingway's Re-Tone of Winter
Sunday, April 11, 2010
Edward Albee's Winter Term
Percy Shelley's revision
EM Forster Revised Winter Term Tone
The winter session is stricter than the summer session. The teachers are different during the winter session, and coincidentally are stricter. In the beginning of the book, during the summer session, Mr. Patch-Withers laughed at Phineas’ story of his belt mix up and jumping out of the tree. In the winter session teachers don’t tolerate any behavior of any sort. After Gene fell into the river Mr. Ludsbury was not sympathetic, just angry that he was fooling around. Mr. Ludsbury even goes to shame Gene by being disappointed. Having someone be angry with you is annoying, but having someone be disappointed in you is humiliating.
“I think you have slipped in any number of ways since last year”
The boys don’t let it affect them for the most part, except for this instance and maybe one or two others because no one can be completely passive. The strictness of the school is definitely at a higher level. The winter session is also going to be awkward because Phineas is in denial about Gene pushing him off the ledge and not even they know where they stand as friends. The situation between Phineas and Gene looks like it might heat up even more soon, which will not make the winter term at Devon any better. The tone of the winter session is going to be tense.
Mark Twain's: The Tone of the Winter Session Revised
Nathaniel Hawthorne's Revisions
“Here’s you prisoner, gentlemen,” announced Brinker seizing my neck and pushing me into the Butt Room ahead of him, “I’m turning him in to the proper authorities.”....
“What’s the charge?”
“Doing away with his roommate so he could have a whole room to himself…. Practically fratricide.”
The quotation shows the angry tone at Devon. The boys are accusing each other of fratricide and throwing each other around like prisoners. Unlike the summer, there is no mercy from anyone at Devon. A fight even broke out between Quackenbush, the manager of the Crew team, and Gene for no reason other than a sense of constant anger that seemed to float through the whole school.
Tone of Winter Term Revised Copy
Charles Dickens: Revised Paragraph
Saturday, April 10, 2010
Lewis Carroll Revised Paragraph
The overall tone at Devon in the Winter Session is angry as compared to the more subtle and nicer side of Devon during the Summer Session. The anger at Devon is escalated through the bad weather compared to the nice weather during the summer. Quackenbush, the manager of the crew team displays this angry and violent tone when he says, “Go to hell Forrester… listen you maimed S.O.B. I hit him hard across the face. I didn’t know why for an instant; it was almost as though I were maimed.” This quote demonstrates the escalating tempers and angry comments seen during the winter months at Devon. Now, all of a sudden, major fights break out because of mean and vicious words. These vicious words are “maimed, S.O.B. and things like go to hell.” All of these words carry terrible connotation and are almost always used to offend someone. This kind of conversation is not described in the Summer Session at all. This is also more evident because of the fact that his temper truly escalated over the position of being the manger of the crew team and a stupid fight. Not only do the things that are in their control anger them, the things that are not in control do to. The weather is a very plausible reason to make a person mad. When a person is cold, they might not be as comfortable and this can cause people to be in a bad mood.
Thursday, April 8, 2010
Winter at Devon
writing assignment
James Baldwin Tone
Percy Shelley "Devon's Winter Session"
Thursday, April 8
You are ready to take the next step in making your pens mightier than swords. You are ready to give one another analytical-writing feedback without my intervention (well, sort of).
Working with a partner, you will be assigned to read three (3) of your peers’ paragraphs.
Follow these instructions:
1. Before you even read the paragraphs, paraphrase the question. Make sure you know what kind of answer you’re looking for before you read. Keep in mind, there will be many possible answers, but they all must respond to the topic.
2. Read the paragraphs. Take turns reading aloud to one another.
3. For each paragraph, ask the following questions:
• Does the paragraph have a topic sentence?
• Does the topic sentence answer the question?
• Is it a good answer?
4. Rank the paragraphs according to topic sentences. Best---Not-so-much-the-best.
5. For each paragraph ask the following questions:
• Does the author use quoted evidence?
• Does the evidence connect to the topic sentence?
• Is this the best piece of evidence the author could have used? (i.e., did they make a good choice, but not the BEST choice?)
6. For each paragraph ask the following questions:
• Does the author analyze the quotation with word-by-word exploration?
• Does the analysis make sense?
• Does the analysis make the same point that the topic sentence makes?
• Does the author stay on track?
7. Rank the paragraphs according to evidence & analysis. Best---Not-so-much-the-best.
8. FINALLY, for each paragraph, do a punctuation, grammar, typo check.
9. RANK the paragraphs. Which one is the strongest? Which one is the weakest? Be prepared to explain your choices tomorrow.
Partners & Reading Assignments:
Peter-- Max (Blake, Carroll, Hawthorne)
Johnny-- Wizard (Dickens, Shelley, Twain)
Findlay-- Michael (Woolf, Baldwin, Dreiser)
Chris-- Ruvkun (Conrad, Hemingway, Forster)
Henry-- Kevin (Kerouac, Nabokov, Blake)
Juan-- Ryan (Carroll, Hawthorne, Dickens)
Caspar-- Aaron (Shelley, Twain, Forster)
Jack Kerouac's Winter vs. Summer Session
“Cards, dice, he shook his long hand dismissingly, I didn’t inquire. It didn’t matter there won’t be any more of it.
I don’t know who that would have been. Nights of black-jack and poker and unpredictable games invented by Phineas rose up in my mind; the back room of Leper’s suite, a lamp hung with a blanket so that only a small blazing circle of light fell amid the surrounding darkness; Phineas losing even in those games he invented, betting always for what should win, for what would have been the most brilliant successes of them all, if only the cards hadn’t betrayed him.
The use of the word “cards” instead of the actual name of the card game shows how boring Mr. Ludsbury thought their games were. This is an example of how the winter session was more boring because they were not allowed to play fun games. However when Gene thinks on the “Nights of black-jack” it sounds like a lot of fun. This shows how the summer session was much more interesting than the winter one. The thought of “unpredictable games” shows how Phineas had crazy fun and random ideas that the boys all loved. This also shows how the summer session schedule allowed for more free time and hanging out and games for the boys. However when Mr. Ludsbury “shook his long hand dismissingly” it showed how the boys were going to have to follow the rules and not be able to have as much free time. The “small blazing circle” was an example of all the crazy things the boys did during their free time in the summer session. The “brilliant successes” Phineas almost had showed how much fun the boys were having during the summer session with out so many rules. However When Mr. Ludsbury says, “there won’t be any more of it” the boys know that they will have to be prepared for a much more boring winter session.
Wednesday, April 7, 2010
Ernest Hemingway's Tone of Winter
Mark Twain's: The Tone of the Winter Session
The Winter Session At The Devon School- William Blake
Lewis Carroll Paragraph
The overall tone at Devon is angrier and more violent in the Winter Session as compared to the more subtle and nicer side of Devon during the Summer Session. During the Winter Session, the campus at Devon is a sadder and more serious place. Quackenbush, the manager of the crew team displays this angry and violent tone when he says, “Go to hell Forrester… listen you maimed S.O.B. I hit him hard across the face. I didn’t know why for an instant; it was almost as though I were maimed.” This quote demonstrates the escalating tempers and angry comments seen during the winter months at Devon. These things never happened during the Summer Session. Now, all of a sudden, major fights break out because of mean and vicious words. This is also more evident because of the fact that his temper truly escalated over the position of being the manger of the crew team and a “yes it does matter and no it doesn’t” type of conversation. This somewhat childish conversation demonstrates that the students in Devon are much more angrier through Gene’s perspective.
Robert Frost’s Paper
The atmosphere of the Devon school during the winter term in my opinion is troubling. It is troubling because of several reasons. Now that the boy’s final year at Devon is almost over, the war is quickly approaching. The war is not a far off event lurking in the back of their mind anymore, but now a approaching reality. They can now enlist into the military and are supporting the war effort on the home front. There is also a social tension because Finny is gone. There is no king to the student body and there is no heir to the thrown. The boys are not directly investigating if it was an accident or if it was on purpose. It is defiantly still on peoples minds if anyone was responsible for this event. With both the war and the social anarchy infesting the minds of the boys, this seemingly peaceful school is not peaceful at all.
Winter Term EM Forster
The winter session is stricter than the summer session. The teachers are different and the weather is worse. The boys don’t let it affect them but the strictness of the school is definitely at a higher level. The situation between Phineas and Gene looks like it might heat up which will not make the winter term at Devon any better. The tone of the winter session is going to be tense.
Sherwood Anderson's paragraph
The tone in Devon is very boring in the winter session. Unlike the summer session, which is more fun, the fall session, is colder, darker and windier making the atmosphere very gloomy. In the winter, kids don’t go outside to the park, one stays inside to keep away from the cold. In the summer everybody was outside giving the school a more alive atmosphere. Also, in the winter session there are many more people, taking away the peace. In the summer all of the teachers stayed in the school but in the winter, the younger, cooler teachers left. After most of the cooler teachers left, they left behind the stricter ones. Because of this all of the school traditions were forgotten.
“I knew, perhaps I alone knew, that this was all false. Devon had slipped through their fingers during the warm overlooked months. The traditions had been broken, thestandards let down, all rules forgotten.”
Because of all the broken traditions, there was no more fun in school. Everything was now all strict. People couldn’t play around as often, no more secret societies and no more things that people look up to in a boarding school. The tone of the winter session in Devon is very boring because there is nothing fun in the school any more. There are no more “cool teachers,” no more old traditions, no more free time outside.
Charles Dickens post: 4/7/10
Theodore Dreiser's Paragraph of Winter in Devon
Winter of Truths
The Summer Session at Devon was a more relaxed time for the students. Not academically but rule wise. The boys got to stay up, play cards, sleep on the beach, jump out of trees, and even sweet talk teachers sometimes. The winter and Devon was the back to normal clean-cut traditional boarding school. But besides the fact that it was physically back to normal, it was definitely not social normal at all. With Finny not yet back at the beginning of school, Brinker was growing suspicious. All of the boys talked about Finny’s fall but not to Gene. With the social hierarchy in awry, Brinker stepped up his game with knowing everybody and being a bit more suspicious with Gene.
“‘Here you are in solitary splendor,’ he went on genially. ‘I can see you have real influence here. This big room all to yourself. I wish I knew how to manage things like you.”… It didn’t seem fitting go Brinker Hadley, the hub of the class, to be congratulating me on influence.”
Without Finny’s sports he isn’t as popular as Brinker is and everything socially tipped. Phineas, already knowing that Gene jounced the limb but doesn’t want to believe it, is going to be very awkward in front of Gene when Brinker starts asking questions. If and when Brinker prosecutes Gene and it comes out, Finny will still not believe that his best friend shattered his leg and ruined his life. The winter term at Devon is going to be a session of truth.
Joseph Conrad's revised winter paragraph
Nathaniel Hawthorne
Form II English
The Winter Tone at Devon
As the freedom of the summer session at Devon slipped away from the boys, the general atmosphere of winter quickly took its place. The tone of the winter session was different than usual because it came after their first summer session at Devon. The fun they had jumping into the river and paying attention to no rules and playing blitz-ball, made the winter session at Devon seem so monotonous. Suddenly the boys had to do chores and go to many classes. There was no free time to mess around anymore. The transition from a zero effort term to a normal one was not a smooth one for Gene. Also, many of the traditions of the school were broken over the course of the summer session.
Gene says:
“I knew, perhaps I alone knew, that this was all false. Devon had slipped through their fingers during the warm overlooked months. The traditions had been broken, the standards let down, all rules forgotten.”
Because of all the broken traditions, the boys seemed unprepared for the school year. They had to get used to the idea that they now had leaders and rules to follow, but they did not want to be told what to do. This made the winter session depressing, tedious, and controlled.